名师帮你修改考研英语作文（9）

Directions:
　　Suppose you and two of your friends have decided to go on a self-tour to Hangzhou and you want to invite another friend Cathy to join you. Write a note in about 100 words to her. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using "Li Ming" instead.

Dear Cathy,

First of all,please allow me to express my heartfelt invitation to you（I am writing to ask you whether you have interest to spend the vocation with me this summer）.Since a friend of mine and I plan to have a Backpack Travelling,I sincerly invite you to join and spend the vacation with us.

You know,Wuhan(Hangzhou) is a beautifl city ,which have a long history.For one thing ,it is convenient for us to go there by train.For another,there would be many famous places like Huang helou,Qin chuan ge(Qiantangjiang,Jinshan Tempel etc..I'm sure that we will have an unforgetful trip in(\) there.
I 'm lookingforword(forward) to your reply.

Sincerly yours

Li Ming

评：考生须弄清楚邀请信的写作规范，邀请信不是一般的信件，应该有所侧重。在句子的结构方面还有待斟酌。同时，要看清题义，题目中说的是杭州不是武汉，同时还需留意一些基本的单词的拼写。