沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[15]

为了迎接2009考研，沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么，请整理整理您的思绪，用文字在这里表达，用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心！为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文，我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评，希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束，请大家快来参加哦^_^

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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

[参赛作品]（jinzilanxin)

Comparison of the desirable job criteria of undergraduate

In this competitive modern world, hurting job is a great work and burden for the undergraduate. How to find a desirable job and what is the perfect job is the most complex question which troubles them for a long time.

A ballet-dancer can dance and rotate with a fixed aim, and then they will have a charming dancing without any vertigo and fall. So we can see that a goal is very important.

This bar chart describe it vividly, each of undergraduate has his way. Most of undergraduate choose the stable as their goal of job hurting, which accounting for 96%; the secondly is high payment, which accounting for 77%; the third one is opportunity of job developing, which accounting for 65%; the fourth one is taste and interesting, which accounting for 50%; the last one is doing a perfect work and have a career achievement, which accounting for 26%.
From this bar chart, we can see that most of undergraduate take stable as their career choice. And only a small part chooses having a career achievement as their goal.

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