2009年考研英语大作文经典范文(6)

作者: 来源:万学海文 时间:2008-12-23 14:29
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Directions: There is an error in an English magazine that you feel must be corrected. Write a letter to the editor to:

(1) point out the mistake

(2) suggest correction, and

(3) express your interests in the magazine.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Wang feng " instead. You do not need to write the address.

                                          May 23,

Dear Editor,

      (1)I have been a devoted reader of your magazine Crazy English ever since a friend recommended it to me three years ago. I enjoy reading particularly articles in your "Wonderful Life" series, which are both informative and entertaining.(2) However, there is an error that I feel should not be ignored. In the article titled "This is Australia" of the May 4th edition, the population in Australia is 21,000,000 but it was printed 2,100,000 (3)It might be only a small mistake , but it could nonetheless be misleading, especially to the serious readers who have a particular interest in the subject.

      (4)I hope you can check it as soon as possible.

                                 Yours sincerely,

                                   Wang  feng

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称呼语

(1) 表示对次杂志的兴趣

词汇:devoted 忠实的

informative and entertaining 信息量大又有趣的

(2) 指出错误及如何修改

be  ignored 被忽视

edition 期刊

(3) 提出希望错误能得到修改

Misleading 误导

(4) 再次期望此杂志能尽快修改

落款

 

            

                                           May 23,

Dear Editor,

      I am a reader who is very much interested in your magazine English Learning. I have read your magazine for about three years, I find it becomes better and better. I learn a lot from it, and my favorite section is World News, which contains the latest news. Very useful, I should say. I have never found any mistake in it before, however, yesterday I found a mistake which is obviously wrong. You conclude Australia not Canada into the G8 in your magazine. I hope the mistake can be corrected soon, and wish your magazine becomes more and more excellent!

                               Yours sincerely,

                                     Emma

 

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