沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[10]

[名师点评]思路可以，错误也较少。但是字数超出过多。考研时考查的是用尽量少的语言表达出清晰的意思。字数多会扣很多分。

When it comes to the ideal professional standards, colleage studentseach hold their own ideas. According to the banbar chart, it is not difficult for us to find that the stability and salary of a job are seriously taken into consideration. The students also pay more or less attention to the development potential of a job, as well as their interests. However, only 26% of them care whether a certain job is helpful in winning merits or not.

More often than not, the college students look highly upon the stability and high salary of vocation, while ignoring personal development. What leads to this situation? There are, to my mind, plenty of contributing causes, among which the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. Firstly, the traditional thinking tells us that everyone must work to live. It seems that the job is a tool used to make a living rather than to win merits for oneself. Secondly, we live in a materialistic society and are taught early on to be materialistic andtaughtto know the importance of money. It is unavoidable to seek for security from future jobs. Moreover, I might also cite individual characters as a reason.

From my standpoint, it is rational to consider the stability and high salary, which pave the way to comfortable life, as two of the important factors in choosing a job. Simultaneously, it is also necessary for us to take our interests and future development into serious consideration, which can lead to happy and colourful life. After all, happiness is the foundation of the life.