沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[9]

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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

[参赛作品9]（jinhu2029)

According to the bar chart,we can see that there are several kinds of standard for selecting professions at university students' heart.With the regard to the ideal mind of vocation,stabilization topped the list,about 96%.With fat salary and development possibility ranks the second and the third respectively,nearly 77% and 65%.And the percent of interest and achievement is a little low,one is 50% and the other one is 26%.

In my opinion,there are some reasons causing the situation.First and formost,with the global financial crisis breaking out,many companys are reducing their staff.So more and more students want to search for a relatively steady position instead of the one which we thought a lot of its development formerly. And with the commodity price sharply rising,earning enough money to deal with daily expends has become the pressing affair instead of the importance of development or interest.

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