【原】The Art of Strategy was written by Sun Tzu’s. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chineseclassical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles.
【改】In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition.
【原】Proverbs are short sayings. They are drawn from long experience.
【改】Proverbs are short sayings drawn from long experience.
【原】People change and places change as well. Jennifer felt this strongly. She had been away for eleven years.
【改】On returning after an eleven-year absence, Jennifer had a strong feeling of how people and places change.
【原】Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone.
【原】Moby Dick is a book. It is a long book.It is about a whale.A man named Ahab tries to kill it. Her man Melville wrote it.
【改】Her man Melville wrote a long book called Moby Dick. It is the story of a struggle of a man against a whale.