沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[13]

[名师点评]写作文字还可以，但是还要注意写作要求的第二点，是state the meaning,及分析柱状图的隐含的意思。这是考研作文写作的思路及套路，不宜做太大改动。

What kind of job will be on the list of agrad’sgraduate's要用正式语job-seeking standards? According to latest statistics, we can apprehend what factors are deciding college students’ decisions about their professions and to what extend.

Stability takes up 96 percent of importance when one selects a job. It is intolerable to enjoy the ecstasy of employment today but taste the torture of dismissal tomorrow. Apparently, grads get this.

Then, salary accounts for 77 percent. High salary does the trick when it comes to stimulating or motivating grads to strive harder.
The chance of self-development makes up 65 percent. It is expected that an ideal job should give much scope to tap one’s potential.
Interest is rated as 50 percent. Interesting work can arouse one’s inner desire for great devotion.
Last, a sense of achievement occupies 26 percent. Success provokes one’s passion for work.

Different people have different standards. Personally, I regard stability of a job as most crucial. An unstable jobis like great winds which will blow me hither and thither. In addition, we can’t upgrade the value of salary. High salary will be reduced to nothing when it means sacrifice of safety, loyalty or morality. We should strike a balance between all the factors when choosing a job.