沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[8]

[名师点评]本文段落安排不错，思路新颖。但是单复数问题，词性问题要多注意。

A first glance at the bar chart tells us the figures of vocational standardsof the college students. We can easily realize that most people put great emphasizeemphasison steady environment and high salary when hunting a job while few of them focus on makemaking a great career.

As far as I am concerned, the main reason for this phenomenon is Chinese’sChinese（Chinese本身有“中国人的”意思）traditional thoughts. Compared to the changeable life with full of challenge, people still prefer steadiness. PeopleCollege studentsstill believe that they work just to make a living which and thiscauses “Iron rice bowl” thoughts still exist at present. Meanwhile, people’s zeal for material life pushes them always put moneyfirst at the first place. In order to earn more money, they always hide their own interests and ideal.

In my personal opinion, nothing is more important than your own interests when you hunting your job. If you never love your career, how could you make your step further? Even though you live a luxury life by your boring work, would you really be happy about that? I would like to be a happy common people rather than a paineddepressedmillionaire. And I think if you really love your job, you’ll do everything with passion which makes you easily succeed.