沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[7]

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The bar chart mainlytoldtells us the ideal career-norms according to college students. It showed showsthat 96% of students prefer steady jobs, and 77% like jobs with handsome salary, and 65% hope toget well-developed well-development through the job, and half the students intend to work in line with individual interest, and 26% enjoy careers that can make themselves attain achievements. We can conclude some information from that.First, almost everyone incline to take a steady job, such as public servants, teachers and so on, where people can obtain good salaries and lead a stable life. Second, compare with psychological gainings, students prefer physical gainings. Third, the characters of ideal careers in college students’ mind always have complex aspects, not just rivet on one side. Consequently, as a undergraduate, I make the choice by deep-consideration but not much distinguished.If there’s a job that can provide with handsome salary, invarible working-time and the sense of accomplishment, I think I would be very satisfied and contribute to it with heart and soul, even though the first job for the college student is more often than not defective in reality.