沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[7]

为了迎接2009考研，沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么，请整理整理您的思绪，用文字在这里表达，用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心！为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文，我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评，希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束，请大家快来参加哦^_^



想参赛请点击进入：沪江考研携手海天教育举办有奖征文活动入口>>>

大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

[参赛作品7]（tracyingz)

The bar chart mainly told us the ideal career-norms according to college students. It showed that 96% of students prefer steady jobs, and 77% like jobs with handsome salary, and 65% hope get well-developed through the job, and half the students intend to work in line with individual interest, and 26% enjoy careers that can make themselves attain achievements.

 We can conclude some information from that.First, almost everyone incline to take a steady job, such as public servant, teacher and so on, where people can obtain good salaries and lead a stable life. Second, compare with psychological gainings, students prefer physical gainings. Third, the characters of ideal career in college students' mind always have complex aspects, not just rivet on one side.

Consequently, as a undergraduate, I make the choice by deep-consideration but not much distinguished.If there's a job that can provide with handsome salary, invarible working-time and the sense of accomplishment, I think I would be very satisfied and contribute to it with heart and soul, even though the first job for the college student is more often than not defective in reality.

>" src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/32502.gif" border=0 mce_src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/32502.gif">>" src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/26508.gif" border=0 mce_src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/26508.gif">>" src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/52955.gif" border=0 mce_src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/52955.gif">>" src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/71602.gif" border=0 mce_src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/71602.gif">>" src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/11087.gif" border=0 mce_src="http://i1.w.hjfile.cn/doc/200811/11087.gif">