沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[5]

为了迎接2009考研，沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么，请整理整理您的思绪，用文字在这里表达，用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心！为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文，我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评，希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束，请大家快来参加哦^_^

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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

[参赛作品5]（jinhu2029)

The ideal standard of profession at university students' heart
According to the bar chart,we can see that there are several kinds of standard of profession at modern university students' heart.With the regard to the ideal mind of work,stabilization topped the list,about 96%,with fat salary and developing possibility respectively rank the second and the third,nearly 77% and 65%.And the percent of interest and achievement is a little low,one is 50% and the other one is 26%.

In my opinion,there are three reasons caused the situation.Firstly,the global financial crisis are breaking out so that more and more companys are reducing their staff.So we students all want to search for a relatively steady position to earn money. Secondly,with the improving of people's living standard,the commodity price has a sharp rise as well.Therefore,we have to demand the high income to deal with daily expends.At the same time,we emphasize identically the development of the job,as the saying goes:The soldier who doesn't want to become the general is not a good soldier.Besides,it is also important that the interest and the sence of achievement in the progress of finding jobs.

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