以下是一些词语替换的例子，各位同学可以参考一下：

duals, characters, folks替换people ,persons

ve, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

ul, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad (如果bad做表语，可以用be less impressive替换)

Eg.：An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive。

army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替换many。

注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg.：Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that...。同理用most...if not all 替换most。

5.a slice of, quiet a few 替换some

the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替换think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)

,business ,matter 替换thing

替代 common 

huge fruits 替换get many benefits

my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11.Increasing(ly)，growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式，所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing修饰形容词，副词用increasingly)

has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

if anything或little or nothing替换hardly

cial, rewarding替换helpful

r, client, consumer, purchaser 替换customer

elmingly,.exceedingly,.extremely, intensely 替换very

necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

ensable替换necessary

appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

e one's attention替换attract one's attention

, dimension, sphere代aspect

indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause

23.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

替换want

attention into 替换pay attention to

in mind that 替换remember

27. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)

ction替换communication

on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth.

name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance

31. next to / virtually impossible替换nearly / almost impossible

ing/concerning 替换about

l/paramount 替换important

34.第一(in the first place/the first and foremost)；第二(there is one more point ,I should touch on, that...)；第三(the last but not the least)

35. assiduous替换hard-working

s替换difficult

eveloped/financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)

trate /manifest 替换show

ably 替换always

us/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用，说什么社会现象是不好的，有害的)

able 替换difficult

ssential 替换typical(举例时常用，例如：a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance)

guished 替换famous

le替换possible

uently, accordingly替换so

丰富多变的句式让你的作文看起来专业而地道，那么从现在开始，请同学们随意选上两句话开始brainstorm，对这些句子搞个外科手术吧，挑战极限，一试身手，丰富多彩的语言一定会为你的作文加分不少！