沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[3]

为了迎接2009考研，沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么，请整理整理您的思绪，用文字在这里表达，用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心！为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文，我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评，希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束，请大家快来参加哦^_^

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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

[参赛作品3]（shcwin)
As is shown in the bar chart,we can see clearly that the standard of choosing a job in university students.It shows that almost every university student need a stable job,and some of students care about high pay,developing,and interesting. The last index which only 26 percent of students choice is to gain good result in the job.

These statistical data inflects deeply the mind of modern students. From 1980s, "iorn bowl" job is always chased by job hinters.Until now, under the job-finding pressure, stable job is still the centre topic in college students.At the same time, in the thought of investing a great amount of money in school, the students take the high pay into account. It is also indicates that the modern students are thoughtless of their interests and contributions expect study.

沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[3]

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