沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[2]

[名师点评]本文语言错误少，表达也很书面化。但是图表描述作文在也是考研大纲要求的要掌握的范围之内的。第一段的分析不够透彻，要反映出学生择业的心里。至少是要体现出最高和最低那两个点。另外第二段的原因不是特别合理，其实主要原因是中国人择业的心里问题，和经济危机的关系不是最主要的.

The picture indicates the statistical figures of vocational standard of the college student. It can be seen in the picture that 96 percent of the student choose the stable work for their vocational standard, and 77 percent want to get a high wage job.

But, why so many students want to get a stable job? I think it might because of the economic crisis. In recent years, the economy around the world is not very prosperous, so most student expect to get a stable job than a high-wage one. In the bar chart, we can also see that there is only half of the student take the interest for one of their vocational standard. In modern society, interest now is not set to be the most important factor for professional work. But is it the best result for daily work? It is known to all of us that interest is the best teacher for us, so I think if one can not put his (her) interest on the job he (she) can not do it well.

In my opinion, I prefer tochoose interestfor (for换为as，用choose……as句型)the most important factor, I will choose my favorite work when I face all kinds of works（最好用jobs或positions）.If a sequence is needed, for me, interest for the first, stability, high-wage, good-development and good-achievement.