沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[2]

作者:bear 来源:沪江考研 时间:2008-12-23 10:29

为了迎接2009考研,沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么,请整理整理您的思绪,用文字在这里表达,用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心!为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文,我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评,希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束,请大家快来参加哦^_^



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大赛作文题目:

Directions:
  Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
  1) describe the bar chart,
  2) state the meaning and
  3) put forward your position.
  You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.


[参赛作品2](flyskymlf)

The picture indicates the statistical figures of vocational standard of the college student. It can be seen in the picture that 96 percent of the student choose the stable work for their vocational standard, and 77 percent want to get a high wage job.

But, why so many students want to get a stable job? I think it might because of the economic crisis. In recent years, the economy around the world is not very prosperous, so most student expect to get a stable job than a high-wage one. In the bar chart, we can also see that there is only half of the student take the interest for one of their vocational standard. In modern society, interest now is not set to be the most important factor for professional work. But is it the best result for daily work? It is known to all of us that interest is the best teacher for us, so I think if one can not put his (her) interest on the job he (she) can not do it well.

In my opinion, I prefer to interest for the most important factor, I will choose my favorite work when I face all kinds of works. If a sequence is needed, for me, interest for the first, stability, high-wage, good-development and good-achievement.

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