沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[1]

为了迎接2009考研，沪江考研特别联手海天教育推出"挑战2009考研" 征文活动。本次活动我们准备了丰厚的大奖。那么，请整理整理您的思绪，用文字在这里表达，用文字来呐喊2009年考研成功的决心！为了让大家共同来学习如何写考研作文，我们特别摘选了大赛的参赛作文和老师点评，希望让更多的同学参与到学习中来。同时提醒大家本次大赛还没有结束，请大家快来参加哦^_^



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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
　　

[参赛作品1]（cool面面）

When it comes to the issues involved college students, perhaps hunting job is one of the most concerned thing we often talk about. As graduates always dream about their future profession, the bar chart definitely shows the ideal standard from their own perspectives. Nearly all of them believe stability is essential, compared to other advantage offered. 77 percent and 65 percent students pay much attention on high salary and potential development respectively. Half of them decide to seek a job according to their interest. Only 26 percent desire the chance of a splendid future.

From the chart we can draw a conclusion that searching for an "iron rice bowl" seems not yet outdated, thought Opening and Reform Policy has been carried out for almost thirty years. Besides, materialism trend is a bitter truth we should not neglect. Compared to the power of money, one is willing to sacrifice his interest and a promising career.

Why hunting job is deemed as the most miserable experience by numerous grads? As far as I am concerned, the root cause is not population explosion but the inappropriate attitude among university students. Though reluctant to take risks, a large number of them is dreaming for a high salary pay. Furthermore, many of them are resigned to mediocrity, which is the least thing we want to see. Generally speaking, rising grads' awareness of holding a correct value is far from an easy task, but the eventual pay-off could well be worth the effort. College students, after all, who determine our nation's future, will create a better world if being guided rightly.

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