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第四篇：(Mameng)

Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address. （10 points）

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing tocomplain(that) my roommate who always has many friends visiting and even has parties in the room. These thingswere done(happen)so frequently that I couldn't work normally. So I have to inform you that I want to have a new room next term. And if it possible, a single room would be preferable.

For one thing, thenext(half year) is my final term in the college, many thingsI have(\)tocomplete(be completed), so the relatively quiet environment is requiredfor me(\). For another, sometimes I must workat the(until) midnight. I am afraid this will interrupt the other in our room. Generally, I wish to draw your attention to my request.

An early response will be appreciated.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

Sahra点评：7分。这是一篇申请信，申请信是向收信人提出某个请求的信件，包含3个部分：1提出请求。语言要简练2说明原因。这一部分需重点明确，论述充分。3请求回复并表示感谢。应采用礼貌诚恳的措辞。此文是标准的3段式 ，大概意思都说到了。但是语言基本功这类还要加强，具体的词语和句子还可以写的更地道一些。读起来就更通顺了。