沪江考研携手海天教育有奖参赛征文[6]

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大赛作文题目：

Directions:
　　Study the following bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1) describe the bar chart,
　　2) state the meaning and
　　3) put forward your position.
　　You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.


[参赛作品6]（wolkebang)

It is a tough time for graduates to get an ideal job while the global economies are experiencing turmoil or even the recession. The situation is so bad that every employee will face the laying off. So stability becomes the uppermost factor of an ideal job for the students. As is shown in the picture, there are 96% of the informants reached a consensus, making stabilization far exceeding other factors. This tremendous recession not only causes people losing their jobs but also cuts the pays of the ones who are still in employment. Getting a high pay seems difficult that 77% of students chose it as a standard of ideal. And approximate two thirds of them prefer development while a half of them also considerate their own interests. But it is ironic that only 26% of them want to make some achievement, which means fewer people care about their contribution to their companies.

The result of survey give good expression to that students really worry about their future in recent recession and their real purpose of woking is making big money. They are self-regard that every aspect concerning their own interests is preferred. There is nothing to make a fuss about it. But, if they fail to make achievements, prove their values, how could their boss promote them and give them a high salary. For These are all by-products of hard working and contributions. There is no such thing as free lunch.

As a consequence, the graduates should adjust themselves to the challenges by arming emselves with knowledge and skills as well as determination of sacrifice.