考研英语考前30天狂背作文(33)

作者: 来源:恩波教育 时间:2008-12-16 10:37

34Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture;
2. interpret the meaning of the picture;
3. make your comments.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.这是一幅发人深省的图画。文章可以分为四段来写。第一段描述图画,第二段分析图中句子与人们平常想法的不同,第三段进行剖析与解释,第四段是结语。The picture features a person who is indulged in deep thinking before a maze. Besides the picture, there is a thoughtprovoking sentence: the best way to go through a maze is walking outwards from the center instead of walking inwards.
This statement is most difficult to understand and is obviously contrary to common sense. On the one hand, if walking into the maze, like working out a puzzle or tackling a math problem, is a game or a competition, there must be rules to prohibit walking outwards. It is also nearly impossible for a person to do so for if he can start from the center, he has already won the game. On the other hand, if this maze is a common building that is big enough, how could it be possible for a person to start from the center if he is outside in the first place?
Such simple reasoning is deeply rooted in many peoples hearts. We turn to particular patterns time after time in our life, and limit our thinking by rules or by common attitude. If we already start from the entrance, then much time will be wasted at various crossroads and dead ends. If we want to improve efficiency at first and then life quality afterwards, we should and must change our traditional mode of thinking. Imagining that we are already at the center of the maze will help solve the puzzle to a great extent-by thinking reversely from the destination, we will find out the road of our dream step by step.
Life is full of situations just like mazes, but it has not so many rules or walls to forbid starting from inside. Lifes biggest tragedy may be that when we finally realize that we have to change our role from a competitor or problem solver to a judge or maze designer, we have already been old. 第一段首先对图画进行了简单的描述,而后将图旁的重要句子译了出来。
第二段第一句是段落的统领句,说上述的句子难以理解,与常识相悖。而后分两个方面来说。首先说如果进迷宫像破解谜题或做数学题一样是个比赛或竞赛的话,必有规则去禁止从里往外走。同时这也不可能,如果他可以从中心出发向外,他已经赢得了比赛。第二点说如果迷宫像建筑物那样大,如果一个人先在外面,又怎么可能从中心出发呢?
第三段是全文的核心,共分五句话,由普通到特殊,由寻常到不寻常,由正常思维到逆向思维,一步步将图画所配的核心句子的意义揭示出来,效果强烈。第一句说这样简单的推理深深植根于许多人的心中。第二句说我们在生活中经常会使用固定的模式,而被规则或众人的想法所限制。第三句说如果我们总由规定的入口开始,那么许多时间将会浪费在十字路口和死胡同上面。第四句说如果我们想提高效率和生活质量,就应该也必须改变传统的思维模式。第五句想象着我们从中心开始将会在很大程度上帮助解决谜题--从目的地进行逆向思考,我们将能一步步地推导出那条梦想中的道路。
这段话告诉我们,逆向思维能帮我们滤掉许多不切实际的可能性或者选择,一开始就确定我们能够成功再反推至成功所需经历的挫折与不寻常的道路,对提升我们的工作效率乃至生活品质极其有益。
最后一段是结语。第一句话说生活充满了类似迷宫的情形,而生活中并没有那么多的规定来限制从内部出发。第二句话说生活的最大悲剧可能是当我们最终意识到我们应将角色从竞赛者或问题的解决者向裁判或迷宫建造者转变时,我们已经老了。这里的第二句话意义非常深刻,是对第三段后面一部分的进一步拓展。第一个对比是竞赛者与裁判--旁观者清,比赛的裁定者肯定是对整个过程了然于胸的人,对比赛者的每一个弯路与每一次失误都清清楚楚。而后一个对比就更加石破天惊--谁最了解迷宫?当然是迷宫的设计者,这样的人极少,但正是他们掌握着最核心的秘密。同样要抓住人生道路上各种问题的核心秘密,很重要的一点就是抓住事物的本质与核心,从中心出发,想象一个结果已经成立,再来找所需条件,事情就要简单得多。这篇文章比较难,属于哲理类的文章。从2007年及近几年真题来看,现在正进入一个由时事向哲理逐步过渡的阶段。这一阶段的特点就是图画作文越来越少地借助图中或图旁的文字,且图画越来越抽象,这对大家的思考力和判断力的要求就越来越高。大家一定要养成看图识图的习惯,提高正确读图与推理的能力。切忌带着脑中固有的想法去读图,把图画往背好的文章上去套。切忌任思绪飘移,离图太远。其次,在确定文章的整体结构后,应对每段的写法有个初步的安排,这时可把出彩的词句等考虑进去。再次,平时在读与背范文时,摘抄各类闪光点,有意识地进行口练或笔练,并在考前慢慢地积累活用的感觉。
35Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture;
2. interpret the meaning of the picture;
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
这篇文章可分为四段来写。第一段是描述图画,第二段和第三段是对现象的解释和评述。第四段是结语。The picture demonstrates three winners of a game on the platform: the runnerup is obviously unhappy about the result and thinks that he might have beaten the opponent and be the final champion with a little bit more luck, but the bronze medalist is quite content with the result and believes that he might not have a place on the presentation stage at all.
This drawing sets me thinking for a long time-it so vividly reflects the subtle changes of human beings under a particular situation. Every athlete wants to have an excellent performance in an important game, but the final result is determined by the combination of various factors. Compared with the final award, the more important element may be our attitude toward the game and life as a whole.
When a person decides to be a professional player and devote himself to his beloved sport, is it possible for him to look beyond game results and at something more significant and more beautiful? Not everybody can be the champion, but everybody has the chance to demonstrate the confidence to be swifter, higher, stronger and the determination to conquer difficulties, surpass himself and hold on to the top.
On the life road, many happenings also follow the same principle. To have a good job and a harmonious family is admirable, but what is of vital importance is the demonstration of human virtues including bravery, responsibility and perseverance. 第一段是对图画的描述。
第二段分三句说。第一句说该图让我深思良久--它生动地反映了人在特定情形下的微妙变化。的确,图画的场景选择非常精妙,且包含了对比的特征。第二句说每个运动员都想在重要比赛中取得优异成绩,但是最终结果是由多种因素决定的。第三句说与最终的奖项相比,对待比赛与人生的态度更重要。
第三段分为两句话。第一句说当一个人决定成为职业选手而献身所热爱的体育运动时,他可以超越分数,看到更重要更美丽的东西吗?第二句说,不是每个人都能获得成功,但每一个人都会有机会展示更快、更高、更强的信心和战胜困难、超越自我、坚持不懈的决心。
第四段分两句讲。首先讲在人生的道路上,许多事情的道理是相同的。第二句讲,在人生道路上,拥有好工作与和谐家庭值得羡慕,但至关重要的是展示人类的勇敢、责任与毅力等优点。文章第二段与第三段意思层递,第四段也直接呼应了第三段,这种层层推进的方式请大家借鉴。

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